Jordyn's ePortfolio

We are learning to: . give our reader a clearer picture by including adjectives in our recounts . correctly place full stops and capital letters Success Criteria: · In my writing I will have included one or two adjectives . In my writing I will have started a sentence with a capital letter and finished it with a full stop Teacher Assessmen t: Jordyn you have included a range of interesting adjectives making your recount interesting to read.  You are beginning to use capital letters and full stops in the correct place. Great writing. Next Step :  To finish off your writing with more detail for example "I love it because......"

Assessment Task Completed at the start if the term and mid way: Draw something that shows what you know about change Teacher Comment: Jordyn you show a clear understanding of change in our environment

We are learning to: ·        To find information and discuss information on a picture graph Success Criteria: ·      We will be able to make one to two statements explaining the results we see on a picture graph Jordyn's Response : "One person comes by bus" "11 people come by scooter" "5 people bike"

We are learning to: · recount an event that has happened to us Success Criteria: ·In my writing I will have written two to three details about something I have done recently Teacher Comment : Jordyn you have included four details into your recount. Well done.